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vajdagabor commented on Writes and Write-Nots   paulgraham.com/writes.htm... · Posted by u/baxtr
vajdagabor · 10 months ago
I agree with Paul. Our creative and intellectual abilities are so powerful, yet there’s a real danger in handing them over to AI. That said, I think AI is still extremely useful for writing, if it complements one’s skills.

I recently published a [major philosophical work][1] that is the result of decades of thinking and three months of writing. I’m not a native English speaker, and although I know what I want to say, I often don’t know how to write it. I may not know or can’t find the right terms or phrasing, or I might make grammar mistakes. Sometimes, I can describe my ideas in a clumsy way, and I need help refining my sentences.

So, I use AI. I think, write my thoughts in my own way, and then work with AI to bring them closer to what I want. It’s hard work. Although AI can be an amazingly good writing partner, it often alters my text in ways that change the meaning completely. Even replacing a single word word with a synonym or adding a comma can turn a sentence into something totally unintended. It can be a lot of back-and-forth work to find the right paragraphs. Still, AI is a tremendous help, and my work would have been more immature and unpolished without it, even if it sometimes feels a little artificial.

Of course, it’s much more ideal to master English fully and to practice writing until it feels natural. But AI helps with that, too.

[1]: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=41954302

vajdagabor commented on Consciousness: A guided expedition into the foundations of existence   monomo.io/mind... · Posted by u/vajdagabor
nabla9 · 10 months ago
With fuzzy terminology logic is meaningless. That's why philosophy puts so much importance in defining concepts rigorously. If you base your theory into some existing views provide sources and put it into context.Like "This is my personal interpretation that takes idealistic viewpoint."

Individual thinking aloud is not as interesting as contrasting and comparing.

vajdagabor · 10 months ago
I don't think we can have a meaningful conversation about a philosophical work you haven’t read. If there’s something specific in this framework you disagree with, please tell me what it is and why. Let me know which terminology you find unclear and why, and where you think my logic fails.

I avoided basing my work on existing philosophies for a reason. Existence and the mind are highly debated topics with many unresolved problems and a lot of confusing ideas. I wanted to understand reality from the ground up—not just to learn what other philosophers thought. I find this approach more effective and reliable, and it led to an understanding that feels coherent, solid, and logical. I believe this model solves at least one or two major problems of philosophy and science, while reflecting reality better than the mainstream model.

This writing is my attempt to share this system in a way that doesn’t require a background in academic philosophy, only the presence of one’s own mind and intellect. We can’t prove anything by pointing to Descartes, Hegel, or Heidegger. These philosophers are known because they used their own minds.

vajdagabor commented on Consciousness: A guided expedition into the foundations of existence   monomo.io/mind... · Posted by u/vajdagabor
nabla9 · 10 months ago
Unfortunately the content is not interesting for me. Try to see the context where it fits into. The internet is full of essays where person after long period of thinking writes down explanation of consciousness with very authoritative style. This is it, this is what it means.

The insights at end seem like standard new age terror management jargon. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Terror_management_theory

vajdagabor · 10 months ago
No, not terror management, and not new age either. This is a modern idealist approach, based on rigorous logic. The insights listed at the end of the treatise might not be convincing on their own, but the writing explains everything step by step. It offers proofs (in the form of logic), but each step needs careful thought to really get the insights that follow.
vajdagabor commented on Consciousness: A guided expedition into the foundations of existence   monomo.io/mind... · Posted by u/vajdagabor
nabla9 · 10 months ago
It's just general flow of the text. I don't know how to analyze it better.
vajdagabor · 10 months ago
Thank you for the feedback, this is already very useful! I will try to improve the flow and style, but that will take some time (or a human editor). I hope you’ll still find the content interesting.
vajdagabor commented on Consciousness: A guided expedition into the foundations of existence   monomo.io/mind... · Posted by u/vajdagabor
nabla9 · 10 months ago
I felt like something is off, so I checked.

Copyleaks AI detector says this is written by AI. https://copyleaks.com/ai-content-detector

Grammarly says 42% of this text appears to be AI-generated

vajdagabor · 10 months ago
Hi, I'm the author. I'm not a native speaker, so I used chatGPT a lot for editing and finding the right formulation of the sentences. All of the ideas and thoughts are original neverthless. I have worked on this writing for more than 3 months. Unfortunately I don't feel the nuances in the writing yet, like a native speaker would.

Can you please show me a few examples where the text feels like something is off?

vajdagabor commented on Sweden Is a NATO Member   government.se/press-relea... · Posted by u/belter
t0bia_s · a year ago
Also, there is 1/3 of population that don't believe in politics at all and ignore it as much as possible, because artificial culture war just distracts them.
vajdagabor · a year ago
Yes, however those people also have right to vote (in democracies) and many of them vote without being sure what they vote for. Democracies can be hacked because too many people are either not interested or not informed well enough to vote for what's really best for them and the country.
vajdagabor commented on Sweden Is a NATO Member   government.se/press-relea... · Posted by u/belter
t0bia_s · a year ago
Or maybe people just agree with this politics. Clearly, you and your source of information don't.
vajdagabor · a year ago
Do you mean, some people just consciously agree with being used and lied to and their taxes being stolen so that the leaders can be richer and more powerful while schooling, health care and economy is in decay? I don't think so.
vajdagabor commented on Sweden Is a NATO Member   government.se/press-relea... · Posted by u/belter
xdennis · a year ago
Fair enough, but he's been in power for 18 years (1998-2002, 2010-present). He couldn't do that without widespread and lasting support.
vajdagabor · a year ago
No, people supported them, but that is because democracy was hacked. Hungary is not a democracy anymore (it's a hibrid regime[1]).

The biggest issue is that the majority of the media is controlled by the government. Also they own jurisdiction and have been gradually rewritten the constitution. Most people who support this regime do that because they believe the propaganda. Many people I know have been bitterly trying to tell their family members that they are watching / listening propaganda (unsuccessfully, for years). Most of Orban's supporters don't know much about politics, they just want to live their lives, so they believe whatever is on TV, radio, online media, posters, etc. For many it is very hard to see what is true and what is lie.

But there are many, many people here who don't like this and want a change. The country is in a state where positive change towards democracy is really hard at the moment, many of us still want to believe it is possible.

By the way, we could see this madness around the world in the past years: Brexit, Trump, Bolsonaro… many people can be led by their nose. Not just in Hungary. I really whish if people would learn from Hungary's mistakes, and don't let the same thing to happen in their countries.

[1]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hybrid_regime

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